Enough already!

So if anyone reads this, probably they are tired of this project. I submitted the last version to my teacher as my final, but he suggested more changes, so I made some today...probably I won't need this new version until the end of the semester, but whatever.
He didn't like my spacing basically, so instead of all the paragraphs being seperated, I've indented them and opened up the space between the lines. I made the brown box bleed and I also changed the subtitle colors and moved the writers name over because it was getting lost in the image. I fiddled with the first line as well. Nothing too major or crazy, because I can never seem to break out of my design box, but I think the little changes make it look more professional.
If I had more energy I'd start again and try to do something really crazy...but as usual...I'm overtired and overwhelmed and overworked and there's not much creativity in me right now.